dun jz concentrate on eyes...
plz dun jz concentrate on eye...
hand, hair, body look awful...
good job anyway.
Author Comments
Might not be of interest to most people.. but hoping to find others who think it's 'alright'. Oh and... yeah, they are both females. At least.. supposed to be.
Just a movie I made for my gf. She likes these kinds of things so.. I made one. If it's good enough, feel free to send it to whoever that might like it.
Happy Valentine's Day!
Poor
I'm surprised this flash achieved a 2.65. There really isn't a massive amount of animation going on, and the music wasn't very good. Unfortunately, some of the people here at newgrounds are serious softies, and emotional flashes benefit from that fact.
By the way. I like the way you paid special attention to the eyes. Good luck, going foreward.
needs work
your art needs work- try taking a class in anatomy or finding some references online. Sorry- but the heads are so big compared to the rest of the body, it looks like their about to fall over really. Don't worry tho- your art will improve.
-ironically they look exactly like something I would have drawn while I was getting started in anime style drawings ^^;;
Poor,
I find it funny that you think this flash deserves a higher score. Its like 20 symbols at most, with weak music. The intro was unnessary, and when i voted on this, caused its score to fall.
Truth is, ppl vote up emotional stuff like this. It lacked animation, length. Also, if the second character was supposed to a female.. you forgot to add tits.
One thing i liked is that the eyes were detailed.. other than that i spent way too much writing a review for a flash i did not enjoy. Anyways, good luck on future flashes!
Silent-Harpoon responds:
If you read again, you'll find it that it was not me who 'think' it deserves a higher score. I'm not aiming for the top.
And about the 'forgetting to add tits'. Have you heard of flat-chested girls?
But thank you for your time watching it and writing a review, and I am glad you found at least a small thing in the movie that you liked.
Sad faggart
Buy a box of chocolates instead i cant stand this type of flash