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If you have not seen any of the vortex series and To better understand this story it would be better to start with Episode 1
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Average Score: 7.2 / 10

Score: 9

"nice movie"

by: Golden-comet

date: August 10, 2006

but the thing is...how do you do all these flash and 14k reviews! That comes as a great mystry to me.

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Score: 6

"ok"

by: Imacow

date: July 21, 2006

-GOOD-
well it was longer then the last movie, so thumbs up. the graphics were the same but still good. the sound was still good and fit well.

-BAD-
well the story ended crappily and from what i see there isn't a vortex episode 4

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Score: 4

"Once again you can see the improvement."

by: BoBadMan

date: February 26, 2006

But its still not perfect, although its really starting to take off. I know its a good story because I find myself wondering what will happen to him next, and really wishing that the whole thing was longer. More work is needed, but this is by no means the worst flash cartoon series I have seen.

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Score: 4

"Could have beena lot better"

by: NasFlash

date: December 14, 2004

Very short, you could have combined this a nd ep3 into one animations, again graphics arent great and that music is badly looped, could have done with voices as well.

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Score: 7

"better"

by: TigerChick

date: November 7, 2004

Hmm i have to agree with ramagi on this one - there really isnt any point to having this into a seperate submission, you could ahve combined all 4. In fact, i dont see any point to it other than to get your submission amount up. But the best one and a nice one to finish "The Vortex" up :)
Graphics were sitll basicly the same andim kind of dissapointed you hadnt taken suggestions and made these graphics look a little less MS Paint-iah by now, as those brown lines on the gorund in this really annoy me. I also noticed there are sitll no voiceovers. However, the music was much better and more dramatic and suitable this time and the plot was much better so this gets decent score from me now.
But it will never get a 8 or 9 unless you take suggestions and clean this up a little bit, continue the Vortex in a newly enhanced version :)

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