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Apr 6, 2001 | 1:40 AM EDT

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This is actually the beginning of the story. I know it took me a long time to make this one but I was very busy with other things. In my opinion, this one isn't as good as the first one I made, but I think if you enjoyed the first one, you will also enjoy this one! More to come, I promise!

Reviews


balkanmannenbalkanmannen

Rated 3 / 5 stars

dis is sam fanni shit you've pot togeter!

vi giv you apprishiashuns from da kaontri in da warm north - SWEDEN. Vi also like manga and dis is greit. but de privius part was better. work moor on part two, right right?



emptynogginemptynoggin

Rated 1 / 5 stars

Crappiness & Suckiness by Paul

I was expecting something cool, I got a stupid little dragonball z guy with some kind of dog running in circles.



therealmantertherealmanter

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Turning Japanese?!

This is really good shame its so short hope you finish it. ^_^



xvllvxxvllvx

Rated 4 / 5 stars

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innphernoeinnphernoe

Rated 0 / 5 stars

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this sucks...