Promenade the Puzzle by micheledauria



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Submitted: 02/04/2004 | 12:26PM EST

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Current Score: 3.64 / 5.00

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when i started to make this short i was not sure that it would have been understood by the world,
it hides a deep message, perhaps too much deep for the speed of our life, we are speaking about smoke.

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Average Score: 7.9 / 10

Score: 10
silly-stungun-millie

"Wonderful piece of animation!"

date: February 29, 2008

To me, the animation conveyed the trappings of addiction. It starts out pleasant and comforting, but even near the beginning a hint of malice crosses the smoke's face... The smoker eventually gives in to the lustful pleasures, despite the small warnings, as seen with his initial coughing. He keeps going back to his cigarette, wanting more pleasure, and the smoke keeps giving it to him.
...But after so long, addiction shows its true colors by taking away his health and betraying him. By now it is too late, and addiction has consumed him while he slowly dies.
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Ironically, I've found the flash itself addictive! The pacing could've been a bit better, but I'm pretty sure that was due to music synchronization constraints. The flickering black-and-white is distracting for the first viewing or two, but after multiple viewings (unless one is prone to epileptic seizures), it's not quite as noticeable. The graphics are amazing, clean, and beautifully done, especially considering that a lot of it was shape tweening, which is hard to pull off convincingly.

You do some amazing work, and I hope to see more in the future!

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jackantrobus

"WTF"

date: November 18, 2007

i had no friken idea wat it was about.i nearly had a seizure

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Score: 10
psyqoid

"bravo bravo"

date: November 17, 2007

exelant.
if you can do a film with grafics that good you can do a real good hore.

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Score: 9
Lambada1

"SIEZURE WARNING PLZ!"

date: November 16, 2007

9/10, ok, but it was a bit too long :p Also, need an epoleptic seizure warning at begining. that strobe was intense.

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Score: 9
mayoarm11

"O.O"

date: November 16, 2007

amazing animation. Just that it was realllllllllly boring lol. I didn't get it at all. He fell in love with... smoke?I am sure it was metaphorical, but I didn't get it.

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