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K, is for Krafty?... >-<

That was intentional wasnt it?, keeping the style nice and simple?, i liked how you didnt over use colors and instead stuck to a simple b/w design with just color as you needed it, that sun looked alittle dodgy too maybe that should have just been an outline i think the viewer wouldnt have gotten confused. I loved the angles you used when the bullets pierced through there targets.

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(Kiss my ass XwaynecoltX)

You've really progressed!

Remember me? I fancied watching a flash by some author whose stuff I'd enjoiyed before and I was really surprised by how much you've advanced since I last saw your stuff.

The sketchy fbf art style was really nice (although the clock seemed a bit too 'perfect' for the style and the sun didn't blend in too well, being a solid colour).

Maybe for your next step forward, you could start making better use of varying line thickness to show off shadows?

The music was nice, and the ending theme started off great, but I wasn't too keen on the way it stopped and played the first 6 notes again and again.

The fading in of colour at the end was also really nice.

However, despite this being sweet on the eyes, the story lets it down somewhat as it's a bit unoriginal and we never are 100% sure of what's going on - why would the guy withstand a bullet to the heart, several more body shots, then be killed in an instant by the last bullet?

It just seemed as if he becamse superhuman for the 2nd half of the movie then lost his power. At least, that's what it seemed like to me.

I think if you combined the art style with some of your humour, it could be a great treat for us.

All in all, this was a lovely watch. Sweet on the eyes, and a fairly original style.

Commando-Cheese responds:

I remember you, Bezman. Thanks for the in-depth review! I could use alot of these tips for my future movies

Hmm.....

Not one o my faves, just a little bit rubbish, lol. But if it was expanded on and had mote of a story, would have been better.

Good Movie

[Graphics] 8 - Refreshing :)

[Sound] 6 - Was good, untill it flipped at the end... What a pitty :(

[Interactivity] 0 - N/A

[Style] 8 - MAKE MORE MAKE MORE MAKE MORE!

[Violence] 5 - Nice :) More blood...

[Humor] 3 - HAHAHA. Suprising ending.

[Overall] 7 - Nice one. Make it longer, with more dudes. Good job!

((( NICE )))

that was cool, nothing like smooth animation Frame by frame is allways cool, and this had some smoothe animation, the music was just the right touch aswell, nice job indeed...

MOVIE COMMENTARY: Smooth frame by frame...

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