This was pretty entertaing but its too short next time make it longer and a better storyline the best part was when he got his chest stuck in his zipper...that says somthing.And dont make the main charecter(who dosent have a name)curse every other word I mean its like seeing the f word every 3 seconds.I hope the next ones better.
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I think this is one of my best movies *yet*, if you noticed something that I can do better, tell me!!
I hope you like it,
Bye,
Buck-o *Buckley*
omg
omg dude that music you used i know that music it's from a old NES game called shadow Gate it's the muisc that palys when you'er truchs start going out! dude Lame!
Holy Shit
This has got to be the worst thing I've ever seen in my life the grphics are the worst part of it all.
Really all you need is a good story line maby some grphic tools and you'll be on your way to making a good movie
again i say good
i reviewed ur other movie which waz beat saddam black n blue i liked it and i like thiz 1. keep it ^ ill check out ur other movie
Buck-o responds:
Thnx :)
Eh....it isn't -that- bad, but....
could still use a lotta work. The plot was obvious and a bit boring, but if ya got the rest covered, that's....kinda okay....problem is, you didn't. The graphics were obviously. uh...not the best, but that can be fixed with time and effort and such. Your dialogue.....bland, and.....pretty crappy. Along with your grammar at times, heh...well..er....as I was saying.....try and not make it as....cliche-like, in a sense, as it was......the whole "murphy sent me" and "pay a visit to mister Murphy", or whatever the hell he said then, things (And imbetween as well) were definatly......well, they were -so- corny and all......now, for the....er, "blunders" part you put in. Some of them were good....but they just needed a little extra. For example-When the door is stuck: You could've had it come unstuck and smack him in the face. When he fell down:His head could've hit the side of the.....hole...thing.....When he's in the garage:Make the garage door come down on him or something. When breaking throught the gate...thing: You could've had the car run into the other ones and...blow up or something....not the best right there, but.....remember; senseless violence is fun! Yay!
Buck-o responds:
Senseless violence is fun!
I will lock those words up in my head :D haha