nice

wow i'm impressed. Like it a lot, i want to see the movie. Grade A+

Good job for a trailer.

Wow, a trailer that's actually interesting, but *gasp* informative. You seem to know what you want out of the series, which is always a plus. I can't even begin to recount the number of trailers I've seen where it's clear the author is completely over-ambitious and will never complete the series in a million years. Visuals look nice, too. The fancy suit in the dark atmosphere really set a mood. Spit screen was a nice touch, too. God knows drawing in Flash is a pain in the ass, so I hope you'll have the perserverance to stick it out and make the complete version. Wings looked a little iffy at the end, maybe add more shape and definition (pointed with claw-like things at the end, like bats). But other than that, really good for a trailer. Nice job and good luck.

When I

When i saw the loader, I thought it looked ok, then i saw this girly anime type thing with purple hair?
Is that a transexual?
Not very appealing.

crap

yep total crap

Wow dude, see

this is why I asked you to do my graphics, this is fucking amazing. Kinda short, could use some work on the timing in a few places, but meh, that's all negligable. Looks very nice. The wings look pretty badass. Can't wait for a final release. See you tomorrow buddy.