i liked dog day afternoon

better graphics little bit better sound
and i cant stress this enough
COLOR

"Minuter Earlier"

Improve the sound, graphics and spelling and it might be decent.

I like that style of drawing...

but the sound was awful. Improve the sound, and maybe add a little shading to your art, then you have a winner.

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i like that you draw the stuff(or sumthing like that) but like all your other clips.. the sound is bad... but it was good!

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GOOD STYLE, MAKE SOUND BETTER AND MORE CLEAR