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I thought the animatino was good. THe graphics were good. I would have liked to see more what happend when he went to eat the cheese.
You can asume certain things happened, but I think it would have been fun to show that. I liked this overal and thought you did a good job.
Thanks!! I mostly dont have ideas for flashes but im glad you stay tuned in this one! (;D
I loved this style here carmel, and the first thing I ntocied was that the preloader was really different to all of the rest!
Not much to say here really, I liked the graphics a look they alsmot gave the whole thing that '3D Visual' look and the story behind it was all good. The whole aniamtion was so good it seemed almsot realsitc, like I was actually stepping into the movie, it had that whole jumbled and qwerky style to me which i find really interesting and enjoy watching a lot, and the whole thing coming togtehr at the end with a sum up of the story helped me especially to keep in track of what happened and what the story was about, could have been a little longer though (:)
Thats about it really, all in all a nice and orignal flash - and ncie prealoder! well done!
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Wow thanks alot T_C!! You just felt what i wanted ppl to! Thanks!!! ^_-
short... and reasonably sweet...
hmm, well it wasnt too bad. i do think that the explanation of what was going on at the end of the movie was vital, as it explained quite well what the movie itself did not.
the graphics - were pretty good from what i saw. you drew the 'criminals' hands (and forearms) from the shop very well, as they looked pretty good.
also, when the customer drove his car into the driveway, that looked very good... almost 3D. so the graphics were good.
the animation was also pretty good - i liked the animation through the movie, it was not too shabby... not too shabby at all.
the music was good - a very good track to choose for this movie, as it went well with everything that happened in the movie.
so overall, i think that the movie could have been a bit longer, or done a little more to explain the story line. but overall, nice work.
overall score: 6/10
(THE THUMB: UP)
Thanks again Marcus! I love making things that looks 3D in flash (although that wasnt even a tween O
I found great sounds and the Forgotten remix instrumental of LP was, i believe, a great choice for this movie! You right, the story shouldnt be understanable only in the end, the whole movie should be while understanding (unless there's a... SURPRISE! coolol..).
Thanks for the thumb up!!
Well, it was entertaining.
Graphics were not bad, and the music fit well.
The story could have been told much better, but as it is, it still explained everything alright.
You did take the extra time to make the 3Dness come through, and it worked. Good Job!
Still, nice work Carmel!
Thanks! The sound could have been better if i wouldnt have recorded a recorded sounds (which have ofcourse been recorded XD).. I tried making bit different style of graphics this time.. hehe i guess it was better.. So, thanks again RedCircle, and good luck on.. umm stuff! (cheers)
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To everyone else who reading this:
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