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Jun 16, 2003 | 4:19 PM EDT

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SONNET: THAT SAD AND JOYFUL DAWN

That sad and joyful dawn,
light full of pity and grief,
while the world wakes in loneliness
I'll praise it and remember it.

The mild light was breaking, shadows
ran from the sun. Light was the eye of the world -
it saw the parting of two souls,
two wills I thought were indivisible.

And light witnessed the tears
that fell from their eyes, ran together. and formed
a river as long and broad as the Amazon -

and heard the bitter, heartsick words
that made the fires of Hell burn cold
and soothed the lost spirits under the world.

Tr. David Wevill

update:

IT LIVED!!!! haha!

Reviews


XwaynecoltXXwaynecoltX

Rated 2 / 5 stars

((( HUH )))

Um ok, dudnt understand it, but it might make for a good scene in some movie i guess, funny face hehe, well untill next time...

MOVIE COMMENTARY: different...

~X~



Battl3Mast3rBattl3Mast3r

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

this must be ur first flash

what a terrible movie, this MUST be ur first flash, good luck, but I cant protect this movie...


EZ3 responds:

It's not! I have over 200!!!!! Just look at the side bar you moron!


CantankerousCantankerous

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Wow, dude.

This is so unerring in its suckitude and dumbitude that I had no other choice but to laugh real, real hard at it. What the hell, I'll vote to protect it.


EZ3 responds:

GOOD!


DevastatoR-da-XDevastatoR-da-X

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

gooood poem!

i can honestly say that i mushc prefered the poem in your message than the actuall flash. the flash itself was very random and lacking a little bit in the graphics department - but i guess i can say that it was mildly humourous :) good work, but can do with quite a few improvements


EZ3 responds:

Thanks for the 3! Bastard!


cyber-agent20cyber-agent20

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

....

pretty average flash movie. funny when the blue guy was flying through the air and when you flashed dirty words, but overall it was okay.


EZ3 responds:

ok, thanks.