((( HUH )))
Um ok, dudnt understand it, but it might make for a good scene in some movie i guess, funny face hehe, well untill next time...
MOVIE COMMENTARY: different...
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tisnot
June 16, 2003 –November 21, 2023
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
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SONNET: THAT SAD AND JOYFUL DAWN
That sad and joyful dawn,
light full of pity and grief,
while the world wakes in loneliness
I'll praise it and remember it.
The mild light was breaking, shadows
ran from the sun. Light was the eye of the world -
it saw the parting of two souls,
two wills I thought were indivisible.
And light witnessed the tears
that fell from their eyes, ran together. and formed
a river as long and broad as the Amazon -
and heard the bitter, heartsick words
that made the fires of Hell burn cold
and soothed the lost spirits under the world.
Tr. David Wevill
update:
IT LIVED!!!! haha!
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Wow, dude.
This is so unerring in its suckitude and dumbitude that I had no other choice but to laugh real, real hard at it. What the hell, I'll vote to protect it.
<deleted> responds:
GOOD!
gooood poem!
i can honestly say that i mushc prefered the poem in your message than the actuall flash. the flash itself was very random and lacking a little bit in the graphics department - but i guess i can say that it was mildly humourous :) good work, but can do with quite a few improvements
<deleted> responds:
Thanks for the 3! Bastard!
....
pretty average flash movie. funny when the blue guy was flying through the air and when you flashed dirty words, but overall it was okay.
<deleted> responds:
ok, thanks.
Enjoyable
A Very odd little short but entertaining nevertheless. A bit more attention to details, such as placing the words on some kind of background, would have been appreciated.
<deleted> responds:
alright... thanks.... next time I'll try to use backgrounds.
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