I agree with the guy before me

Looks like you have the skills necessary to make a good flash animation its just you need to actually make a good flash animation maybe asking the people here on newgrounds for ideas or getting some friends arounds and brain storm but the graphics and sounds are good just the style is slow paced and the actual story .... if any is pretty pants

It's crap

I totally hated this flash , it's all good being able to draw and use flash but seriously , it needs something actually happening , something interesting , and it is way to slow paced.

this flash fucking sucked

i only gave you a 7 in graphics because i don't have flash, but just because i don't have it, doesn't mean i couldn't make a better one.

Piece of shit

Learn how to make good flash

Blah...

Kinda...went on..and on..and on...