This was ok, could use abit more to it and more detail, but it was alright, try adding more detail next time

Needs some detail

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oh my god, wow, i laughed at the john travolta part

i liked the random screaming, and the john travolta thing. but the whole thing is only funny the first time you see it. good movie overall. nice job

It was quite good - the whole random screaming bit made me laugh, but the rest of the script was a little boring. More stuff like the Metal Gear Outtakes pleeeease :)

You get a nice goose-egg... Better luck next time.