Why make something mature and censor it?!
Makes as much sense as buying a hotdog and throw out the sossage cuse it is unhealthy.
Living with Lolly EP2
October 13, 2016 –May 2, 2020
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
Author Comments
So it's been a while but I actually finished Episode 2... I kind of fell into the same trap I did with Episode 1, constantly adding or removing things, redrawing the older parts and getting into this constant loop of trying to fix everything.
But here it is ^_^ I guess Episode 1 was like the test pilot and this is where I'm trying to define where the series will go. Now it's just a case of breaking down the plot points into manageable segments... I don't think another 19 minute long episode is the way to go >_<
Thank you to everyone who helped with this, especially the wonderful voice cast who lend their talent to my dumb anime bullshit.
I'm starting work on Episode 3 really soon, so if anyone is interesting in being part of the project, drop me an IM ^_^
Reviews
<deleted> responds:
My entire diet consists of hotdog buns...
Also I never planned on LWL being strictly mature, it's definitely meant to push the boundaries in that regard, but in more of a teasing way than anything x3
Well,it looks like you've done it again,folks!^^ I like the story plot in which the protagonist is evil and the antagonists are not.Animation still needs work,as if,to be a little bit...faster? Either way,great job!
<deleted> responds:
Thanks for the support, and the feedback :3 speeding things up has been something a lot of people have pointed out, so I'll definitely try to fix the pace in the next episode
well you certainly know how to be a teaser haha.
some scenes were a bit too slow for my taste but overall, i did enjoyed watching this ^^
good luck with the next one
<deleted> responds:
Thanks man, looking back on it I could have done more to tighten up some of the scenes, I'll try and improve the pace next time around
Love it love it love it!
hey , nice episode . i didn't saw this earlier but well done . this a lot of work man . you deserve more views . i like how you did the sequence of scenes . my 1st critique would be the intro . it felt like the whole thing was broken . 2nd , a lot of scenes could have been played faster . examples of this is when luna is sneaking behind lolly , character pauses are taking too long for the most part . i don't want to complain about the animation . but you could do more improvements in future episode . still fun to watch .
<deleted> responds:
Thanks for the feedback ^_^ yeah looking back on it there's definitely a lot of areas that could have been improved, I really need to work on timing and pacing more, as well as animation in general xD but I hope the next episode corrects some of the issues here.
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- 3.68 / 5.00