damn! too short... mooooar!

Stupid newgrounds its deleted my review on the last one i had said that it was so beautiful in all caps and a bunch of random shit well point is i loved this so much that it's the first ever A rated video on newgrounds i've ever hearted i'm that impressed i love this i can relate don't ask how but it's amazing i hope to see more from you because this was just beautiful so amazing i kept saying it was beautiful over and over again to my brother right next to me but perfect video i for sure loved it

Holy crap, man! Well done!

its beautiful!

This is exceptional animation, but it cuts off rather abruptly. A scene where she flops down next to him in bed afterwards, or short circuits on top of him would tie everything together. We need some resolution after the... uhh... "climax" of the story. Still five star work though. :)