It's a little weird, and some of the writing is illegible so I can't read what's going on half the time. The lack of dialogue didn't help, but a short without any sounds or any voices can work so long as your viewer has an idea what's going on. I had no idea what was happening or what the story was, but I liked it because it made me laugh a few times. I appreciate random and nonsensical humor. It's one of my favorites.
The animation fluctuates from good to indistinguishable art every now and then, so I recommend practicing consistency with your drawings. But other than that, I enjoyed it! 3/5.