Really well done

I have to admit though, that your start was really weak. Animation and detail during that was minimal and the voice-acting and script was coming off as forced. I know you intended for this guy to really come off as annoying and a general attention-whore, but in all honesty, it nearly turned me off from actually watching the rest.

After that vid though, it really picked up from there. Your timing -what with those texts and general plot- was thoroughly well paced, and the animation was incredibly fluid. Little things like the knocking the can off the table, or the scene with the general state of her room, made for great detail too.

Overall, you did good work! I think you could do with someone suggesting quality control for you, since little things like a door-shutting sfx when she leaves, or slightly dripping to the splatter would make excellent touches. Still though, I'm looking forward to where you go with this!

(Oh btw, as an after-thought, I think if someone scrolls down while watching, the sound goes out of sync with the vid. I think you've imported a movie into flash rather than animate in flash, so I don't really have any advice for you here...)

Well what can I say.

It's overall very well done, but for some reason, I think it could have been better.

- Art and animation looked pretty good.

- Voice acting seemed fine, though the guy's voice is a bit off. Then again that could be your intention, since the guy is, well, SUPPOSED TO BE ANNOYING.

- Humor is there, but well, it doesn't seem to get to me. Funniest for me was "TITS OR GTFO" spam which swarmed the computer all of a sudden.

- There is the horror part, yes, but I've seen so much worse and simply laughed at it, this is not getting a reaction from me. I simply *yawned* when blood started splattering. (For real.)

- Yeah, what I've read is that people didn't really see it coming, but I was pretty sure she would kill him.

Personally I would have liked to see some more messages on the message board after she sent the pic. But ah well. Overall it's good and well done, but it just did not get to me. However, I think the concept is unique, which is something you don't see often anymore. *Applaud*

4/5, 8/10

Lol'd

Did pretty good in my opinion. I hope this continues. Didn't mind the animation and thought it was a pretty funny episode since there are basement dwellers that probably don't have the balls to do that.

Loved it!

Loved it loved it loved it! Of course, this was mostly because she killed that jackass, but still, it's a worthy reason. Animation was pretty good too, except for the mouths. Didn't like those mouths, and you should probably find a better voice for Edith. Jackass's voice was great though, can't wait for the next one.

great

I like the artistic style, and the idea, the voice actor of the dude (victim) could use some work though. Also I didn't understand some of the abbriviations, but that's my problem, not yours. Great job though.