not bad... for a first game

that said, it could use *A LOT* of work.

To boil it down to the bare bones, it's basically a "pimp my gun" game, with some music and animation, though the graphics are far, far worse. Honestly, most of the graphics are bad- again, I understand, first game, so it's not as bad a problem as it could be. The music gets very repetitive very fast, and for some reason, selling the guns causes lag. Very, very bad lag- rendering the game, as has been said, more or less unplayable. (the little popup color commentary guy doesn't help matters any in that regard- I tried setting my prices too high to get a lag-free chance at designing something, but he kept popping in to tell me my prices were too high, causing lag.)

It'd be helpful to see something that shows how each part will affect the overall gun- I was just slapping stuff together and selling it. Similarly, it'd be nice to be able to design and sell more than one gun at a time.

Finally, it'd be nice to be able to DO something with the money you get from selling guns- not just watch the little counter go up. Maybe buy new stores, or do something to actually lower the 'society' bar?

overall, for a first game, not terrible, but not great, either. It has promise.... but it needs work.

meh

the musics ok and the message is preventing me from ever opening up a gunstore

nice consept

it would be much better if the grafics were better and you could try out the wepons

Badly programmed. Message up its own ass.

The crowds running by the gun shop cause ridiculous slowdown the moment you start selling guns. It's enough to render your game unplayable, and there frankly isn't very much here to play to begin with. Your art is underwhelming, the way most parts are flat black silhouettes with a few being more detailed and colored makes them look terrible when they're put together, and several of the bodies are positioned improperly to link up with stocks or barrels... add to which several of the "bodies" are very clearly -handguns- and totally inappropriate to begin with.

Also: Your message just reads like a sad knockoff of Oiligarchy and Oiligarchy was pretty goddamn sad to begin with.