Awesome man :D

But one Star off,because i want that you make a sequel with detailed Creepers.
What I mean is,Creepers have natuarlly to little blocks under them as feet.
But nice vid anyway =D

damned!

dint noticed the subtitles untill the end when he was falling! still, creative clip dude!
next time ill think twice before killing a creeper...

seqeul plz!!!!!!!

it was nice.. but i recommend making a sequel.. he almost met different creepers.. maybe in the nex part.. he falls down.. but doesnt die? its up to u then.. just make the sequel

Almost Perfect.

Sequel Recommended. Maybe you could make a game kind of thing, with multiple endings. Also, try and make the creeper have 4 legs rather than being 2 blocks with no legs. Music was good, mainly because it was from Minecraft, as well as the story. Also, maybe you could make a proper game where you actually control the creeper, and you could follow a story. Almost Perfect.

An ok flash,

Edited to reduce pointless paragraphs, and sorry for ANY bad grammars. I am like this and it is really cold. TL:DR? Read the first 5 "-" sentences, but you can just go ahead and read the whole paragraphs =]

- Not an interesting story, but can be interesting because of those who are curious of whats gonna happen next.
- Creepers do not jump constantly, though it is kinda weird if you can't make him walk and just slide.. though it is a small sense of humor.
- Texts, or dialogues are far away from the creeper; making my eye stare at the text, then the creeper, then the text, and so on. Please try to make us users keep our "eyes" at the scene (Basically the foreground and middle ground; aka bottom to middle).
- [Scene] Switching from the current situation to the flashback, the creeper pause for 2 seconds, and then visit his family. Try to make the creeper "Doing what he suppose to do" If you keep switching any flashbacks, current scenes, etc. [As we enter flashback the creeper is "Jumping" to his parent, not "Started jumping."]
- Dialogue is "Ehhhh." I guess the creeper is also a narrator? The idea where the protagonist is saying everything he saw/seen, like:

"This is my life, and it is pointless because my uncle and grandpa is dead, and now I'm walking, looking for something. Maybe a new world where I won't see threats. Oh look! a hole in the mountain! Might as well jump down this dark (900 meters long) hole down the bottom of the earth's crust and see where my pointless life is heading."

Plain boring dialogue, which can bored many reviewers if this last for 3 minutes. I believed reviewers are here to watch flashes (Mostly for humor purposes,) but not "novel".

> Of course, sad situation are times when life feel pointless, but that usually happens when figures don't talk. This is a story too, so I won't bash on it; story have dialogues and sentences, but seeing how you made this a sad flash, you will need, for a better score in my opinion:

- Better graphic; drawing or effect that causes amusement.
- Funny scene like Paper Mario (TYOD and Super Mario Wii)
Ex: "My Dad is Slain" "YOUR DAD INSANE?"
Ex2: "Wow! A human up there? I got the heiber jeiber..." "WHAT? YOU GOT THE BEIBER/Beaver FEVER?" (Bad jokes probably lol, just thinking about a figure that have hearing problem).

-scenes from another flashes, which I only recommend if you made contact with authors of other "Minecraft" flashes, and your flashes is good = meet proficient satisfaction.
Ex: "My buddies up there tried to chase two human just because they wasted their resources on a pirate ship and a snowman with guns. Turns out they can't get them because they rode on a roller-coaster." (AKA this was in a minecraft flash, though I might get the pirate ship wrong).

I got to end - Going to cousin house, so I do hope you do make a sequel. If you constantly make the same story, sequel, episode, series, or something; same Minecraft flashes, then you (should) tend to improve. I don't know how you going to improve if you keep on making flashes almost like.... as: A flash about UFO, then a flash about Mario jumping off a plane, then a flash about a pineapple tree, then a flash about Evil Baby, then a flash about.....

No, I think you should stick with one parody (or whatever you call it) for a while. However, your choice, but if you stick with making this Minecraft flashes, then you can review the story you just made from 4 flashes in the future, and see if you need any improvement, and a new sequel/series. Try to add humor too!

- If you keep on doing flash and stick with Minecraft, you ought to improve, and ought to get some "Minecraft" fans. Remember that creepers is all about exploding when they are close-in-contact with humans. This is a sense where creeper may have a pointless life since the beginning.