Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
You ever have one of those days when you just completely ignore the warning labels on EVERYTHING?
Dilarus never told me, but its really bugged me since we started talking... what do you think these style of character looks like without a shirt... REALLY?! Where does the skin turn to stick :P
-JD
"Hey, mum im on newgrounds!" Woo! Props to Jordan for taking pity on an unknown writer, and to all you people out there who dont read the label, see you next year!
- Dilarus
Characters and story by Dil ^_^
why is it...
...that I waited forever and loaded 5.5 MB for a 1 minute movie?? dude, thats serious not cool considering Im on high speed. plus, I find the lack of proper arms on your characters annoying and I would say also that its an excuse not to have to draw and animate them but the rest of your character and backgrounds are good so I cant lol. besides that its nice.
I think its cuz of the pictures at the end, theres a gallery of like 10 concept art things which woulda raised the file size, sorry :(
Nice short.
I really like your style of animation and art its nice, and the story was very funny, so made sense that you should counter the problem with alcohol. Great work.
Got a good wayof doing it
but could have done a bit more to the time travel part of it though
mediocre, at best
you needed to play on the idea of time travelling with energy drinks abit more. this ended too abruptly i think.
the punchline could use a bit more...punch?
I liked the animation and the writing was acutually pretty charming. I just think that last joke needed a bit more umph to really make it a great short. All in all though, it's pretty good, and I think you should keep writing! Good luck!