Mmm, try harder next time.

I can't tell if you made this terrible on purpose, so I'll just assume that you support PETA. I like the sketchy effect, but you overdid it by steaming piles. Also, the seizure effect was unpleasant. Just try to calm the effects next time. Also, add more than 3 scenes. If you do this, maybe it will actually make PETA look good, rather than just cause eyes to bleed from the flashing.