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There are a lot of things wrong with this movie, even though it has good intentions:
1. The intro, where it say's "Sasuske of all Sharingan", the quality wa fairly poor and more time could have been deligated.
2. The intro, where it had the Ninja Chronicles logo, could have been spiced up a bit.
3. The black writing sometimes didn't fit in with the backgrounds, you could have used speech boxes.
4. Music could have been better.
5. Sound effects could have been better.
6. Animation and Graphic quality could have been better.
All of these could be sorted out if you spent more time on this flash.
I would really like to help you with these, I could create an excellent Narute Ninja Chronicles Logo and a great SasuskeOfAllSharingan logo. PM me and I could help you with that, as it seems graphics is not your strong point.
Thanks, I look forward to Episode 2.