the drawings werent good at all... some of them i couldent even make out next time try harder...

The animation was little to none, and it cut off about mid way. I would have probably looked over the rampant phallus drawings but it had a sad face for about half a minute before cutting off. I was disappointed.

You might want to work on this a little bit more. It can turn out to be a really good flash, but as of now the drawings are very confusing and it's overall not very original, just a slideshow.

Clean it up. The text is so messy and disorganized, it is hard to make out what it says. There was obviously no effort in the artwork or the "dialogue." Keep working on this