Interesting

I don't think the swearing is relevant for an 'E' rating. This was on biggie's CD, right? Thomas bounces very nicely, but the track is not very detailed. But it's just a loop, after all. Oh, and I see you've put Biggie's face and spliced it into Thomas'. I like how you've revamped the tank engine song with a modern twist though. It's quite well mixed.

I just can't tell which clock made this, and what does it mean to sponsor this? I'm sure biggie wrote this. OK, I'm struggling what to say. It just seems quite simplistic that's all, there could be more to it, such as different scenes or backgrounds. It could be different from just the same loop over and over again. And it would make sense to credit Biggie in the Additional audio part instead of just taking all the credit for yourself. That's a little selfish.

Rating: 2/5

Thanks for letting me listen!
-SpXer-

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Simple loop, really.

If you had made the song yourself as well, it would be far better. But I know it's not your song.

It's absurdly funny, that's what I'm giving you some points for. Problem is that the video isn't in sync with the audio, it's a bit faster and soon enough, the loop isn't in sync any more.

I'm not sure what else to say. Would be nice to see some variation, as opposed to the way it is now, with very little variation in animation. The entire flash even loops, with no play or replay button.

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Im torn

-Art&Animation-
Art:Just lots of screen shots of things and easily drawn stuff.Although fr the kid shows you get 1 point.The flower exploding thing added to the nonsense.
Animation:The mouth did not sync or add well with the song lyrics.It was just an opening scene then a loop of Thomas the train and a flower exploding.It really got annoying.

-Music-
The whole flash is just a song.But when I first started i hated it but now it grew on me from time time each time I heard it the more I liked it.You should of added a mute button though.

-Improvements-
Mute button is what this needed

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Smooth but lacking

This unfortunately would probably have been better a few years back, but it need a bit more to it unfortunately.

The lips weren't synced very well, more random movement than anything. Though the actual train was in time, it felt like you didn't want to put much effort into this, which is a little saddening.

I liked the face on the train, but there needs to at least be more scenery. Maybe try some camera movements and have us sort of scan the scenery of weirdness that would probably be involved.

I know that this isn't the most serious of flashes, but at least put a little more effort in your flashwork, so it doesn't end up another piece of spam crap. And this teeters on the edge of being that.

But it has some potential at points if you put more work effort into it.

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woow

i usealy HATE rap but this ... this is AWSOME... nice turning a kids song in to a rap... totaly doo more like this ^.^