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Superb Mario Bros.trailer

June 8, 2009 –
July 31, 2009
This entry was deleted.

Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.

Author Comments

This actualy has taken a while to make, it is my BEST flash yet, and im dead serious. Im almost complete with the 1st episode, ive put much effort in this flash more than any other flash(as you can tell) STAY TUNED FOR THE REST OF THE EPISODE!!!!

personally, i think its pretty good

Reviews

If this is your best flash then I say you should go back through some flash tutorials. Your artwork is good, but with the lack of animation it's hard to really judge the artwork. I know this is a trailer and as a trailer it should suck me into watching the released episodes, however it doesn't. I'm not even sure how your flash series will be different than other Mario flash series on Newgrounds you didn't state anything. You just showed Mario and Luigi being Mario and Luigi and that was it. You need to make the characters move more in other words animate them.

|| Good Points ||
*Good Artwork
*Great Sound

|| Bad Points ||
*Bad Animation
*TRAILER - What's The Series About?

I understand you're a beginner and all, so don't be scared when someone gives you constructive criticism. The animation was really choppy. That was probably just my only problem with this flash.

Very nice, though.

I won't be mean about this, because I understand you're new-ish to flash animation. For a beginner, this is a decent piece. Keep at it.

Constructive Criticism:
Art could use work. Animation could be smoother. Audio quality isn't great, and the song cuts off abruptly. Try synchronising the animation to the music. It's a somewhat arduous task, and daunting for a beginner, but makes a big difference.

i thought it was good the music was not perfect quality but i can tell it was worked on hard. idk about Hyde132 because you havent submitted anything and i bet this took him a long time

yo rogers, thats epic, im bad at criticing, but i love it, cant wait to see the whole episode, that person that gave the one is retarted. good work!

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Score
2.26 / 5.00