If this is your best flash then I say you should go back through some flash tutorials. Your artwork is good, but with the lack of animation it's hard to really judge the artwork. I know this is a trailer and as a trailer it should suck me into watching the released episodes, however it doesn't. I'm not even sure how your flash series will be different than other Mario flash series on Newgrounds you didn't state anything. You just showed Mario and Luigi being Mario and Luigi and that was it. You need to make the characters move more in other words animate them.
|| Good Points ||
*Good Artwork
*Great Sound
|| Bad Points ||
*Bad Animation
*TRAILER - What's The Series About?