A taco and the overused song, that sux.
I've seen more original crap coming out of dead crack addict homeless people.
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
I AM DELETING THIS BECAUSE PEOPLE THINK THIS IS SHIT, SO I AM GOING TO MAKE THIS SMOOTHER
A taco and the overused song, that sux.
I've seen more original crap coming out of dead crack addict homeless people.
The only thing I could see that you changed was scratching out the "burrito" and writing "taco" under it. That and I think you might have made the guy react more when he got shot...
Regardless, I couldn't really see any improvement over the first time around. Keep working and try to make an animation with a story and backgrounds. Hopefully you'll be able to make something really good some day.