Alright...
The text was poorly spaced. Guide was terribly short and was essentially a slideshow and hardly in depth on how to do it.
If it gets blammed, I suggest working on the text, and perhaps explaining how it works.
Making a lemon battery
August 2, 2007 –January 29, 2019
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
Author Comments
Update[8/4/07]: Added music to background
Update[8/4/07]: Added Play and pause button
Update[8/3/07]: Added co-author to credits
Update[8/2/07]; Added intro voice
Update[8/2/07]: Added Educational parts
I am an amateur flasher and this is A new science series I'm starting, this short film shows you how to make a battery out of a lemon. Really fun to make, don't blam because educational, pass it because its enjoyable, if you're going to give it zero without any thought, don't vote, please leave reviews.
Reviews
<deleted> responds:
Thank you, but you shouldn't have given it a complete zero, actually, other people really liked the movie, and the fact that I'm coming out with a whole series of science stuff, If this gets passed, I will edit the movie to explain, and replace the existing file, so tell people to pass it!
Wise one!
Educational thing is a bit lame. But I like the new style, maybe it will catch on. Anyway, if you are gonna teach us science stuff you should do it NG style, teach us how to make home made rockets!
<deleted> responds:
I definitely will, because I know how! You see, I used to be in a science program called GATE (gifted and talented education) and we did kick ass experiments, we even mummified stuff!
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that was bad... thats all. ok...
<deleted> responds:
Really? Other people thought it was awesome!
im not blamming this because its educational
im blamming this because its on a website with clear pictures and descriptions a hundred times over. this is nothing new, its cool to make a battery from citrus, but this flash was not worth my time.
like i said, you should have stuck with a video or picture tutorial, not flash.
<deleted> responds:
Thats not a review, thats you complaining that you cant do it.
Simplistic as hell, but....
Very simple. It was almost a slideshow, but it got the job done, which I suppose is its purpose. Next time I would prefer an interactive one where you make the thing yourself.
<deleted> responds:
Good idea, I'll make a game
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- 1.98 / 5.00