Amazing, just amazing. Everything is smooth, but I took away half a star because I can't find the original thing, so, maybe a link in a reply or in ACC2(If you make it) to the original story, or can anyone tell me how to find Adeshra on PDF please? Aside from that, amazing everything.

Awesome music choice and excellent artwork!

My only problem is that the link you provide for the music you use is no longer valid (for me at least), if you could either list here or provide a new link to the music used, I would greatly appreciate it.

Also when or if you post this or have posted this story, please provide a link to it. You have captured my attention and interest in your story and I believe I would throughly enjoy it.

okay.... BUT NONE OF THE PANTS MATCHED WITH THE SHIRTS!

Just... WOW!

Love it. Between the music, the originality of it and the graphics, I have to say you seriously wowed me.
Despite the thing with some clothes not quite meshing as well as they could have in a different pose, I Still give this nine out of tens stars. And it's only that meshing problem that dropped a star. That was the Only reason it didn't get ten.
Great job and I hope to see more of your work!

AMAZING

i seriously just love it, the character and the clothing design and everything else is just wonderful, i love the music alot i just play the game to listen to the music and making my adeshra version of my charcter, question to the maker, what language are they singing in