But that's all it was.
The script was well performed, but the animation lacked.... animating. You only tweened in that flash, and that makes it pretty boring to the eye, (I'm guessing you also used the V-CAM, to add a bit more eye candy :3).
The graphics were at a good Photoshop level, and I have nothing to complain about there.
My only problem is the lack of animation; you seem frightened to use obscure camera angles. Try a bit of FBF every now and then, (An example for your style is 'LazyMuffin' He uses your style, and does FBF)
Overall; Good :D