it was good
it was not bad it was preety good
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
Hello once again my fine compatriots. Milano Day has rolled around this year, and me and the fellow... Milano.. ites? Submit flash all about the Crew. This is my submission for MDay 2006 - hope you all like it.
(Milano Crew .com)
(Pirate Punch .tk)
it was good
it was not bad it was preety good
Stooopid
Hilariously Stoopid. Good job (and good advice too, I will never pet a monkey agin)
lolololololol!
that was really funny :P
????
Are you sure.... Unblocking IceImp gives a 30% increase of sexyness!~
Hmmm Milano as in cookie?
Lol i didn't quite get it (i'm probably missing something) this was really funny, i especially like the part with the sheep, and the part with the clocks.
The Good:
*Artwork is pretty/really good.
*Very humerous and people who don't get what Milano is still would laugh (at least i did).
*Sound quality is good also, its not from microsoft sam, its not from a bad target mic, it's really good.
The Bad:
*Some of the lip synching was bad, like when the ketchup bottle says monkey (i pay attention to that :P).
*Maybe have a little thing explaining Milano day at the loading screen?
*The artwork on the sheep is what deserved the pretty good, it was kinda...i'm not sure but the rest was better and could use a bit of work.
All in all, i'd say this is a really good flash, 4/5. Also, very unique randomness :P
Thank you. This is probably the MOST constructive critiscism I've ever gotten.
I learned how to lip-synch properly during the process of making this movie - as is obvious in the last scene. Unfortunately, being on a tight deadline, I did not have time to update the other scenes with my knowledge. I like the idea about explaining in the preloader though - I will use it for future movies. The artwork on the Sheep scene was lacking, I admit. Again this is the direct result of trying to finish up the night before.
Thank you for your comments,
Slink