The graphics were poor, the sound kept cutting in and out and there was no plot what so ever. I think if it wasn't for it being random and funny sometimes this would be dead. Train with the... the uhhhh... flashmaker thing... and keep your humor. I belive you can do better! All you have to do is give up your sociul life and pratice 16 hours a day and you can be like a flash knox (he is random as hell). Peace out.

I know it was the point of the film to be random and strange, but it got to be too much at points. Some parts of the cartoon were funny, but the absurdity could be more amusing if you gave the whole cartoon just a little more continuity. The animation was pretty cool, could be great with a little more practice.

yes this is your menu creator. It was great. Im glad it turned out so great. Im not just saying this because i made the menu, that would be stupid, i truly think that , in the future, could animate as a profession.

This was a pretty cool flash but there are things that should be worked at. It's not that this is bad but I don't think it;s good enough to be a last episode.

The graphics were very mediocre, and in some places just excrusiatingly bad. Let's just say some characters looked a lot better than others.

the voice acting was done pretty well, but sometimes i couldn't understand what the characters were saying, subtitles helped... But still.

Overall, a pretty good flash, hopefully I will get to see better thing from you, you got some talent ;)

3/5

i like the idea of a random, seemingly pointless episode about trying to find a plot (see Style above), but the cartoon itself wasnt very well done and as far a random things go, it still wasnt very entertaining. the sound was horrible, mainly because the volume keeps changing (usually staying at a level that i can only hear with my speakers and computor both at max volume). it was a decent try, but just not good.