Does the camera really need to cut every second?
I'll start out by saying that I didn't like it, then continue by justifying my position. The graphics looked like they took forever to do, yet the edges still came out looking unfinished because of the number of blocky-looking figures. Although the flash was in the style set by Star Wars, it had no actual action scenes- I don't count it as an action scene if you see no fighting, just the camera cutting back and forth between them during the fight. And what was with the camera cutting all the time, anyway? That effect only works if it's not overused as you've clearly done here. Don't cut away because you didn't feel like putting in the filler, make the filler to make the flash good. The only thing I really liked about the flash was the music, and that wasn't yours. Try harder next time. I don't understand why or how this made front page...