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Tech-no-lo-gic

September 6, 2005 –
January 6, 2024
This entry was deleted.

Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.

Author Comments

Thanx to eveyone who voted and reviewed

My first flash ever, enjoy!

Reviews

great...

everything was perfect exept for the soundtrack..but that goes along with it so in my opinion a very smart and thoughtful flash...

Excellent

it all looked very well and the timing was very well down and since the song keeps repeating it was nice to see you adding more and more in each time. Very good job for your first flash and lots of effort.

Not bad

I would love to give this a higher score, but the truth is i'm reviewing this based on its actual content not its context (given its your first flash animation.)

At times this wasmt much better then a screen saver, and i'm not the biggest fan of 'music videos' on newgrounds, but this wasnt that bad.

YOU HAVE SKILLZ!!

THIS is your first flash?! I wish I had those kinds ok skills at my disposal!
Well, the graphics were awesome. They really went well with the music, which, truthfully, I never really liked until just now. The fact that it changed my mind about the song says loads. I also liked how you included a bunch of other symbols found on the web (including that damn banana!), and the robot was a nice touch, too.
If you can pull stuff like this off right now, and people only get better with practice, then you are poised to eventually become one of the next Kings of NG Artists! Keep this up!

Great first try...

But you jumped the gun trying to get your really good animation finished too quickly and made some bad choices and mistakes which makes me only give u a 3, when I want to give this a 5.
First off. The audio was great. Awesome song to base an animation of this kind on. A great choice. Then drums and CLAPS come in and you have animations for this. But you represent the CLAP with crashing CYMBOLS! And these animations are good but they are off timing with the beats they represent...
Then it kicks in a lot more and u bring in a sax, DJ, guitarist and I dunno what the other one is supposed to be... all the new sounds could be represented with the DJ. And there is no sax or guitar sounds to give them a purpose.
Now you try to keep things fresh and bring in a dancing robot. A not too great attempt to keep it fresh(he is badly animated... his elbows especially...)
The "Technologic" was offtune all animation but it got really offtune at the end of the animation. I suggest fixing these problems and resubmiting or replacing this with the new one. It has great potential and it was a VERY solid first try. Now try again ;)

<deleted> responds:

Fair enough dude. All the other instruments were just for show to be honest, and the robot was on a bit of a wim lol. Thanx anyway, constructive criticism is better than a slating. (the last instrument was a harmonica by the way)

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3.48 / 5.00