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SSB:Brawl

March 28, 2005 –
May 23, 2020
This entry was deleted.

Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.

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Tighten it up

The animation is a really good start, but the action wasn't terribly exciting. [Spoiler] It was just watching characters come on stage and then die in the pile. Some things that might liven the next one up:

1) A plot. Even though it's just a melee, the characters could still talk about something. The laughing was a good start.

2) Speed up the characters. If this means you have to simplify the drawings, it might be worth it. (If so, consider stylizing them.) Watching them stroll slowly onto the screen then fling an arm, slowly, wasn't really exicting. Speed up the time between battles, as well as vary the time of the battles. Almost all of them seemed to be equal.

3) Add camera perspective. Consider showing the battle from different angles, as well as a first person perspective from one of the fighters. Use zooms as well to dramatize the battle.

4) Add a background, or setting that can be destroyed with the characters.

5) Do something with the bodies. Just piling them up really took away from any depth the movie could have had. The characters coming on screen didn't acknowledge the 4' stack of corpses, didn't slip on the blood, and didn't have to move around them. Maybe they could decompose in some interesting way, or a few could be thrown into the background.

6) A little soundtrack with some upbeat music could add a lot of flare to the whole movie. Just don't use repetitive dance music :> Music from a movie will have enough dynamics to aid the characters with varied actions.

Overall, good start. I really liked the movement of the capes.

<deleted> responds:

wow, thanks. your ideas are actually good. I'll think about that. BTW, about 5 and 6, I had to cut those to meet the size limit. Editing sucks, huh?

ummm

I'm really confused.... I mean, the drawings were fantastic, but the animation of the gore/blood and such seemed to be way below your talent level. (at least by judging from the drawings) I'm sure there is a reason for this, but care to explain?

<deleted> responds:

no.

What? No backround?

Yes that is the greatest fault with your flash. No matter how wonderful everything else looks (and it does look really good), it all suffers from having a white back drop.

<deleted> responds:

Its killing me inside. there will be one in next one

Funny.

I was laughing my ass off watching Ness do his psi attacks, I LOVE THIS!!!

Wow...

Great job. Ness' and Mewtwo's powers should really be something like that... hope part 2 is just as good!

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4.21 / 5.00