NEWZ FLASH PLEASE READ
Everyone theres an error with stage size. 550 hight to 700 width
SUGGESTIONS, TIPS, AND WAYS TO IMPROVE
flashfrog
Hmm. I noticed a drawing mistake. The guy on the right...his hand is wrong :P. needs a bit more improvment. but its a working progress.
Heres a cool tip. make the guy lift up his gun. as he lifts it have that light (glare) effect run down the gun as he lifts it. also. grab a side pic of a glock off google and trace over it using the line tool. than it would look really cool. and finaly. make them blink. good work no sorri keep up the good work
pobah
yours is...now don't take this to hard. kinda noobish...BUT...it can be improved. and quiet easy. Earth. Make it look more earth like by adding in more islands and stuff. have some clouds (use blur effects...if you have flash 8).
Work more on the explosion abit more. have things float away (OMG SO MAY LAYERS TO DO THAT IF TWEENED). But we have a long time till this is done so keep up the good work :D
bennoben
Your heading in the right direction here. Just need more improvment on the graphics. but your heading in the right direction here. What you could do is ad in camera shakes when the plane flys near the camera and a big camera shake when it passes it. or even have the plane say (rotate) abit.
as for the mum part. lolz good idea. You should have her holding a roller. Holding it with that getting ready to hit something pose. But good keep up the good work.
sandypaw
hmm...alot to improve on here. Its way to basic. also I got lost really. Uhm...hhmmm. I suggest you lern to draw alittle sorri if that sound harsh. But it had to be said
KyleDaFox
Your also heading in the right direction. Cuz of your style I can't really suggest anything. But...hmmm. I know. When the guy gets hit. Make it eratic (if i spelt that right). Like swing and know the guy out. and have blood (but colour white) sprey out abit as he flies off stage.
other than that keep up the good work
WhipperSnapper
Now yours so far...and don't get me wrong people. is the best one so far. SO FAR (onless i beat it :P) But im sure theres more to that part. But no suggestions for you or anything. keep up the good work
And now an update on my work. part 1-2 (yea i know also very basic but like you a working progress)
if you have any tips for me let me know
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/071007/8 4537_jpart_1.php
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK ALL