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Amateur Artist

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Amateur Artist 2007-07-01 20:07:41


This is pretty much my VERY first time at Pico, so... uh... ya, here it is :)
(sorry about the eraser marks)

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Yes. Yes, I do give them seizures.

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Response to Amateur Artist 2007-07-01 20:10:01


Oh and heres my edit :) It looks kinda MS Paint, but its really GIMP... and yes my scanner sucks, so it aint a very good edit

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Yes. Yes, I do give them seizures.

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Response to Amateur Artist 2007-07-01 20:11:16


he looks kinda like he wearing a bad wig :P

Response to Amateur Artist 2007-07-01 20:13:45


At 7/1/07 08:11 PM, Ertyguy wrote: he looks kinda like he wearing a bad wig :P

Yeah...
Thnx, anything else to comment?


Yes. Yes, I do give them seizures.

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Response to Amateur Artist 2007-07-01 20:15:09


At 7/1/07 08:13 PM, mrpersonguy wrote: Yeah...
Thnx, anything else to comment?

It seems that his legs are a little too short, or his abdomen is too big. Either way... I think you get the picture.


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Response to Amateur Artist 2007-07-01 20:17:38


At 7/1/07 08:15 PM, majorakirby wrote:
At 7/1/07 08:13 PM, mrpersonguy wrote: Yeah...
Thnx, anything else to comment?
It seems that his legs are a little too short, or his abdomen is too big. Either way... I think you get the picture.

Yup i noticed that too.
More?


Yes. Yes, I do give them seizures.

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Response to Amateur Artist 2007-07-01 20:30:08


At 7/1/07 08:17 PM, mrpersonguy wrote: Yup i noticed that too.
More?

He seems kind of stiff.


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Response to Amateur Artist 2007-07-01 20:51:53


Really? ...Yeah, i guess.
Thnx again. More comments are appreciated!


Yes. Yes, I do give them seizures.

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Response to Amateur Artist 2007-07-01 21:07:55


At 7/1/07 08:10 PM, mrpersonguy wrote: Oh and heres my edit :) It looks kinda MS Paint, but its really GIMP... and yes my scanner sucks, so it aint a very good edit

Why are there yellow dots all over him?

Higher quality, please.


I have nothing to say that is at all relevant.

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Response to Amateur Artist 2007-07-01 21:11:22


Ya there was an interlacing problem somewhere along the way.


Yes. Yes, I do give them seizures.

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Response to Amateur Artist 2007-07-02 12:22:32


The neck is to skinny and the head looks, messed up.

Response to Amateur Artist 2007-07-02 13:12:37


At 7/1/07 08:10 PM, mrpersonguy wrote: Oh and heres my edit :) It looks kinda MS Paint, but its really GIMP... and yes my scanner sucks, so it aint a very good edit

His left arm is longer than the one hanging down.
His torso is larger than his legs which are also too short.
His ear is way too high up and centered to his head.
His hair looks like a bad wig.

imo

Response to Amateur Artist 2007-07-02 17:18:18


I think that gun takes the short bus home.

Response to Amateur Artist 2007-07-02 19:12:46


How about this one? (Edits coming in a sec)

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Yes. Yes, I do give them seizures.

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Response to Amateur Artist 2007-07-02 19:14:26


And here's the edit.
I forgot the little orange circle on his shoe, but thats minor stuff

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Yes. Yes, I do give them seizures.

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Response to Amateur Artist 2007-07-02 19:16:25


The lines are a bit too bold, and the shoulder is missing where the stock is supposed to butt, i know, but if i did it otherwise the edit would have looked like crap :/


Yes. Yes, I do give them seizures.

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Response to Amateur Artist 2007-07-02 19:18:15


Mmm..that's alot better.
I think it looks better un-colored for some reason.

Good jub.

Response to Amateur Artist 2007-07-02 19:20:12


better, but still - THE HAIR >:B


If anyone can spare it, I would really appreciate $0.60 on paypal PM me perhaps?

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Response to Amateur Artist 2007-07-02 19:27:10


At 7/2/07 07:18 PM, MisterDielectric wrote: Mmm..that's alot better.
I think it looks better un-colored for some reason.

Good jub.

Yeah, i agree, but the only reason i need to put an edit is because if i do end up making a flash (if you think i jumpin the gun, calm down it wont be for like another 6 months) it has to be in color because i dont have enough time to handdraw frame to frame pics for a flash


Yes. Yes, I do give them seizures.

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Response to Amateur Artist 2007-07-02 19:44:47


At 7/2/07 07:20 PM, HahaBears wrote: better, but still - THE HAIR >:B

I cant get it right man, there are so many picos out there and they all have different hair! Ill try to get it right next time, but meanwhile, id appreciate it if you gave me some advice or a small example.


Yes. Yes, I do give them seizures.

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Response to Amateur Artist 2007-07-02 21:11:32


What is up you all?

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My topics when I wasn't an asshole...12

NOBODY IS ALLOWED TO STEAL AND/OR EDIT MY SIG WITHOUT MY PERMISSION

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Response to Amateur Artist 2007-07-02 21:31:26


At 7/2/07 07:12 PM, mrpersonguy wrote: How about this one? (Edits coming in a sec)

His hand looks like it could be going either way in my opinion. It's much better than your first one.

At 7/2/07 09:11 PM, Lorkas wrote: What is up you all?

wut?


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Response to Amateur Artist 2007-07-02 22:15:18


This is just something i felt like drawing.

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Yes. Yes, I do give them seizures.

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Response to Amateur Artist 2007-07-02 22:18:25


At 7/2/07 09:31 PM, majorakirby wrote:
At 7/2/07 07:12 PM, mrpersonguy wrote: How about this one? (Edits coming in a sec)
His hand looks like it could be going either way in my opinion. It's much better than your first one.

Yeah, there's something wrong with the knuckles there, definitely, but it looks a bit better in the hand drawn than the edit i think...


Yes. Yes, I do give them seizures.

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Response to Amateur Artist 2007-07-02 22:51:36


And here's a really crappy quick sketch of some weapons.
Keep in mind really crappy and quick sketch.

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Yes. Yes, I do give them seizures.

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Response to Amateur Artist 2007-07-02 22:53:03


anyway, im good for today :-/
ill do some more tomorrow


Yes. Yes, I do give them seizures.

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Response to Amateur Artist 2007-07-02 22:56:47


You should spend some more time on your drawings/sketches, it might look alright then.
And about Pico's hand, it shouldn't be showing that much, eg;

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Response to Amateur Artist 2007-07-03 17:16:07


What about this? This took took me, give or take, 5 1/2 hours. These are only the thumbnails though. They look a lot smoother, so I decided to use them instead. If you want the full picture, just ask I guess.


Yes. Yes, I do give them seizures.

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Response to Amateur Artist 2007-07-03 17:17:41


Whoops! Sorry. Well, here's the picture.

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Response to Amateur Artist 2007-07-03 19:40:36


At 7/2/07 11:02 PM, JunkyCow wrote:
Oh no , a dinosaur, get in the car!

Full speed ahead!!!

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