I got photoshop today, i used it today, and i came up with this.
And i would like you to tear it to pieces. Find every fault, so, hopefully i can fix them.
I need help
At 6/25/07 11:38 AM, insipidmortal wrote: I got photoshop today, i used it today, and i came up with this.
And i would like you to tear it to pieces. Find every fault, so, hopefully i can fix them.
I need help
fuck... the quality... ill have it up in a second,
forgive the triple post. I shant post soon, but i will work on whatever you say.
At 6/25/07 11:38 AM, insipidmortal wrote: I got photoshop today, i used it today, and i came up with this.
And i would like you to tear it to pieces. Find every fault, so, hopefully i can fix them.
I need help
I'm not that great at photoshop, so i don't like to point out others faults when i see them in myself...
Well, if you wish us to be cruel...
First off, the proportions: All wrong. The arms are waaayy too long (Unless that's the style you're going for, which i assume it's not.) In fact, the legs are even shorter than the arms; not a good thing. Shorten the arms, lengthen the legs and it should work out much better.
Next, there's the face. It's really off-balance, and way too small. Also, the body looks a little...limp. And flat. Again, that has to do with proportions, so i'll set that aside. But i can't tell if it's a boy or a girl.
Anyway, apart from that, it looks good. Maybe a little more shading, and a few tips on colouring, and it'll look much better. Believe you me.
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Left arm seems a little too long to me.
It's better than my 'art' anyway.
At 6/25/07 11:46 AM, TheSilverSerpent wrote:
First off, the proportions: All wrong. The arms are waaayy too long (Unless that's the style
you're going for, which i assume it's not.) In fact, the legs are even shorter than the arms; not a good thing. Shorten the arms, lengthen the legs and it should work out much better.
i tried to fix these, see for yourself, it isnt quite smooth at the moment, as i want to get the proportions right before reshading.
Next, there's the face. It's really off-balance, and way too small. Also, the body looks a little...limp. And flat. Again, that has to do with proportions, so i'll set that aside. But i can't tell if it's a boy or a girl.
i took the face out, and will add one soon. Hopefully, by fixing the proportions, i have fixed the body.
Its a girl.
Anyway, apart from that, it looks good. Maybe a little more shading,
More shading will come soon, as im more concerned about proportions.
and a few tips on colouring, and it'll look much better. Believe you me.
your talking about the yellow skin right? It wasn't yellow until i added the shading, is there any way to fix that without starting over.
At 6/25/07 11:56 AM, TomFoolp wrote: Is that a white gorrilla?
yes, it is... thank you for your constructive critisim, with your help, i have greatly improved my ability.
I seem to have passed 4 posts in half an hour, i may go to bed before the times up, but i will still gladly take in critisim.
At 6/25/07 12:21 PM, insipidmortal wrote: your talking about the yellow skin right? It wasn't yellow until i added the shading, is there any way to fix that without starting over.
If you did your skin on a separate layer, you can always Ctrl+U the skin layer to change its hue (remember to check the "colorize" box in the Hue and Saturation window!). If your skin isn't on a separate layer, you'll have to use the lasso or magic wand tool to select the skin and then use Hue + Saturation.
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