Hey, NG. My roommate and I submitted short stories to a writing competition late last year, won, and are getting our stories published! A hard copy being available to buy in March called "The Dog's of War"
It is a furry publication, so I don't know what to expect in content with the others included in the anthology, but my roommate and another friend of ours had already been working on a universe, building a world of intergalactic war. We pretty much thought of it as "Starfox meets Blackhawk Down" kinda tone.
So I chose to write about a sprawling empire of gorillas/simians, my roommate chose dogs, and our friend chose a race of cats. From there we would collaborate and confer on details about each other's worlds and how their cultures interacted with each other. We're really hoping it's something cool that people could get behind.
We're still writing stuff, we've been made aware of a similar anthology / short story competition that's themed towards "Dystopian" settings, and we think we can each find something in the same world that could apply. We've drafted horror-themed shorts as well as an expansive epic trilogy which is kinda like our "A" story. I mean, really that came first, but we're still polishing it. "The art of writing is rewriting" kinda thing.
I'll be posting the published short here throughout the day. Anyway, here's "Raid of Ismara." Enjoy!
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“What are they hiding?” Skulking, shifty looking dogs. The doberman soldier had no idea she was being watched. Seen at such a distance that the air seemed to simmer and shift as if she were a full-bodied mirage, seen from on high. She filled the screen at such a clarity that her simian watcher could identify markings on her uniform. Worn, old battle dress, clunky and cheap weaponry. She was clearly unaffiliated to any official military, but rather some sort of soldier of fortune. Every uniformed body down there seemed to confirm the fact that this massive prison facility was guarded by mercenaries. A hodge-podge mixture of bored dogs baby sitting a bunker-complex labor camp.
She yawned, directing her attention to her prisoners. Getran citizens, simians of all walks of life. A finger tapped the brim of his observation monitor impatiently. The scanner wade through the many faces of these prisoners. Humiliated, dirty, avoiding eye contact with the Doberman guard as she paced between their ranks. She sneered as she cradled her rifle. The same finger tapped more forcefully, and its host let out a sigh. “This is disgraceful.”
The Olive Baboon had the distinction of being an Intelligence Officer of the Getran Naval fleet. Aboard a stealth reconnaissance cruiser designated “Blackdrift” in low orbit above a remote planet within the Canine cluster. The dogs probably named this planet after a figure of their worthless lore, but to Getran cartographers, this planet's name was computer-generated centuries ago as CB4L. “C” for Canine, “B” for “Breathable”, “4-Low” for being the 4th rock from their lowest star. The planet looked unremarkable and dusty. Terraformed by dogs as a mining colony mostly. This sprawling prison facility had been kept secret to any database the apes had eyes in.
“Where are you...” the Intelligence Officer muttered, sweeping the sensitive camera over the crowds of simian prisoners. There were so many of them; apes of different shapes and sizes, different ages. All of them lugging around mining equipment and navigating back and forth between patrolling guards. The Baboon stopped and his heart sank. The camera paused over a very young Silverback gorilla mopping up a puddle. Quietly, he closed his eyes as he internally held his emotions in check. His eyes opened with reinvigorated, fierce hatred for the dogs.
“Those fleabags are gonna pay.” he seethed.
“What? What'd you see?” A voice piped in from the dark control room.
“A kid...they got kids down there, Brekan.” he rubbed his temples in frustration.
Brekan, the Lars Gibbon pilot of the cruiser, jolted up from his seat in the dark bridge, clambering over empty chairs that he could barely see, wading his way to the only light source in the room. “What the hell, they're slave driving kids now!?”
“He's a tiny gorilla, I think he was born in the facility.” the camera settled at the mouth of a tunnel where workers funneled in and out lugging canisters. The prisoners leaving the tunnel handed off a small re-breather to a worker on their way in. Guards with batons barked and beckoned the new worker to hurry adjusting the mask, and threw an empty gas canister in their arms. After kicking them into the tunnel, the cycle resumed endlessly.
Brekan shook his head in disbelief. “Just how long has this place been here?” A tinge of worry swept over Brekan's face. He pawed the Baboon's shoulder. “You don't think they have more kids in there, do you? You don't think they're having them work in the tunnels, do ya Pillen?”
Lieutenant Pillen eased back into a more relaxed position in his seat in a futile attempt to suppress his disgust at the notion. “The kid's the first I've seen, and he wasn't anywhere near the lines or the cave. Kid was probably mopping up...blood...or waste, or I dunno.” Pillen sulked. “But our guy...he's gotta be in there. I've identified Getrans that were on the same missing ship as he was in that tunnel line, and unless he's somewhere inside, far away and safe from the gas, they probably threw him in the tunnel.”
Brekan leaned in closer to the surveillance feed. An orangutan ripped off his mask and shoved it into the hands of the next in line. The guards tensed preparing to beat the ape, but he buckled over and vomited on the floor.
Pillen turned his chair, facing the empty space between Brekan and the monitor, “They're gonna try and get him to develop weapons, but I don't think he's going to help those dog bastards.” Concerned for his fellow Getran, the ape that was next in line moved closer to assist the orangutan, but gets pushed back by the guards. The sickly slave spewed more at his own feet.
The Lieutenant cupped his long chin, trying to wrap his head around the situation “It could be a few more weeks of observation, but unless he's inside one of these giant bunkers, somewhere in this expensive facility.”
The orangutan leaned back, looking up to the sky while the sun washed over his face.
“They probably shoved him into the tunnels...” Pillen's wandering eyes returned to the monitor. “Trying to force him to change his mi-...” Pillen's jaw slacked open in disbelief. The orangutan in the monitor was the ape he had been searching for. Weeks of dodging patrols high above CB4L, of blackouts, electronic silence, of tension and stuffy air in a cramped and lonesome ship. The tired visage of relief on that orangutan's face validated all of their efforts and hardships.
Pillen could hardly contain himself. “B-Brekan! THATS!- He's!- Call-get the-CALL HQ ON THE-!”
Brekan grinned ear to ear, “I'm on it, Lieutenant! Nice and steady.”
The monkey returned to his seat. Soft red lights breathed to life illuminating his control panels as he flipped switches that lit the bridge several screens at a time until the whole room conquered the suffocating black. Blast shields over the window ports lifted tepidly.
The Lars Gibbon peered to the orbiting spaceport, geosynchronized above the heavily defended facility. One wrong move, one misstep, and that platform would alert the Canine Defense Force. The fragile truce between the Simian Empire and the Canine Government would tip into a costly war if the galaxy learned of this heinously illegal labor camp.
With a magnetic buzz, a panel popped out just long enough to silently but firmly jettison a capsule out the front of the stealth cruiser. The projectile quietly, subtly, flung in the direction of the space port.
to be continued, pretty tedious that I can't just copy/paste the indentations I made, gotta copy/paste it paragraph at a time.