This is very nice has some good meaning to it looks un finished though, give the mirror side more of a glow or shine.
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At 2/11/16 06:02 PM, XwaynecoltX wrote: This is very nice has some good meaning to it looks un finished though, give the mirror side more of a glow or shine.
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It is un[finished\. I just wanted to see what critique I could get in the lineart. Thank you though.
At 2/11/16 04:32 PM, risebeyond wrote: Constructive critique, please be nice.
Firstly, let me get what I like said first. The pose is nice; simple, sure, but it flows well and it's balanced. Also the proportions are actually pretty on point, so good on you there.
There are many things I could point out individually, but above all there's one thing I think you should really look into before anything else; form. Putting it simply, what you need is the ability to think in and portray 3D objects. Go back to basics and learn to draw and shade spheres and cones and cylinders and cubes and all those basic three dimensional forms. It sounds tedious and stupid and boring, I know. But it's important to do because all complex forms can be broken up into those basic forms. That said you can draw anything, literally anything, if you can draw basic forms. As of now the forms look very flat and two dimensional.
Hope this helps! Keep it up!
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At 2/11/16 04:32 PM, risebeyond wrote: Constructive critique, please be nice.
The drawing itself is almost there. Try adding as much anatomy as you can into the figures. The figure on the right's head might need to be turned to his right a bit more if he's meant to be looking at the other. Go into it with the mindset of a 3D space and you should be good.
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The drawing itself is almost there. Try adding as much anatomy as you can into the figures. The figure on the right's head might need to be turned to his right a bit more if he's meant to be looking at the other. Go into it with the mindset of a 3D space and you should be good.
I see what you say. Thank you.
At 2/12/16 08:15 PM, risebeyond wrote:The drawing itself is almost there. Try adding as much anatomy as you can into the figures. The figure on the right's head might need to be turned to his right a bit more if he's meant to be looking at the other. Go into it with the mindset of a 3D space and you should be good.I see what you say. Thank you.
No problem
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At 2/16/16 12:47 PM, metal-daze wrote: let me ask you something do you think this is good?
Good question. I think its alright. But that depends on what you compare it to.
At 2/25/16 04:28 PM, risebeyond wrote: How about now?
I can tell that it's Light and L..
I think the lighting is inconsistent, you can have one light source coming from one direction and then another fill in light to add more form to your characters. Right now it kinda seem that the lighting is coming from everywhere.
At 2/26/16 03:12 AM, Black-Crystal wrote:At 2/25/16 04:28 PM, risebeyond wrote: How about now?I think the lighting is inconsistent, you can have one light source coming from one direction and then another fill in light to add more form to your characters. Right now it kinda seem that the lighting is coming from everywhere.
Actually its not Light, but thanks
