At 1/28/16 01:24 AM, QuirkyStudios wrote:
Okay thanks for the information. :) I'll be sure to incorporate it into future art pieces, and I won't upload sketches to my main art gallery. I see what you mean with the lack of good details.
How do you all like this picture?
So when you're just doing pencil work and not going through the finishing processes I expect there to be more quality in the narrative or composition of the artwork to balance it. This picture is kinda boring.
By narrative, I mean, what does the picture say? Are you drawing something cool? Something meaningful? If you had to explain the content of your drawing to someone without showing it, is your picture worth 1000 words? Composition is a more complicated principle with a lot of different components that make it work. Balance, rhythm, movement, variation, value, etc. It's hard to pin good composition down into rules, but study it and it will come naturally to you. I think you're already showing a sense of movement, which puts you ahead of some artists I see here, but you could push it a bit more. Here is a cool website that explains compositional elements of cool paintings: http://www.scottmcd.net/artanalysis/?p=1094
Your linework and shading is okay, not fantastic. If you can improve your narrative and composition, you don't need a lot of improvement there, but if you want your artwork to stand on technical skill, then you need to work on it a lot.
These tutorials should also help you:
http://design.tutsplus.com/tutorials/quick-tip-the-line-of-action-make-your-character-poses-more-dynamic--vector-5554
http://design.tutsplus.com/articles/cartoon-fundamentals-how-to-draw-a-cartoon-body--vector-18651
http://jnketeer.tumblr.com/post/19915033886/i-really-like-practicing-line-of-action-gestures
http://grizandnorm.tumblr.com/post/90506885768/tuesday-tips-line-of-action-the-line-of-action