So few views until now, so I thought i link it in the forum...
please critic the music video i made :)
cheers
At 9/27/15 10:29 AM, Joenu wrote: So few views until now, so I thought i link it in the forum...
please critic the music video i made :)
cheers
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/658337
Pretty cool! Like the backgrounds in particular. What was this animated on?
Perhaps you could take a look at mine? :S
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=87jtakMhnvk (Music by a friend, animation by me).
Totally different type of animation to yours
The backgrounds were really nice, the colors you chose really set the mood. The animation I found a bit lacking though. It was a bit stiff and jerky in parts. Sometimes the seed would immediately change direction which is a very jarring and unnatural motion. For instance when the seed makes its landing at the end it floats back and forth towards the ground, it eases out, but it doesn't ease back in to change direction. I whipped up something real quick to show you what I mean.
The animation was working for you with the loop of the seeds movement, it had a lot of dimension to it, especially in the hair part.
Nicely done though, I'm curious how long did you spend working on this?
At 9/28/15 09:32 AM, ChillyCheese wrote: The backgrounds were really nice, the colors you chose really set the mood. The animation I found a bit lacking though. It was a bit stiff and jerky in parts. Sometimes the seed would immediately change direction which is a very jarring and unnatural motion. For instance when the seed makes its landing at the end it floats back and forth towards the ground, it eases out, but it doesn't ease back in to change direction. I whipped up something real quick to show you what I mean.
The animation was working for you with the loop of the seeds movement, it had a lot of dimension to it, especially in the hair part.
Nicely done though, I'm curious how long did you spend working on this?
Ha, thanks for your efforts :) ! Yeah, you're right I should have spent more time on the movements. That's something I tend to struggle with. I feel more comfortable with animating backgrounds...
I was working on this animation for about a month or one and a half. By using the loop i made it easy for myself so I could avoid drawing a whole lot of annoying in-betweens;).
thanks again for your feedback! I will consider this for my future animations.
