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Check out my stop-motion film

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Check out my stop-motion film 2015-08-11 06:27:04


Hey!

Check it out it's my new stuff :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BWU41KD1cKA

Response to Check out my stop-motion film 2015-08-11 08:13:41


At 8/11/15 06:27 AM, RistoKy wrote: Hey!

Check it out it's my new stuff :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BWU41KD1cKA

why does it have to bee so long? I don't want to discorage your effort but it's somehow tasteless in my opinion!

Response to Check out my stop-motion film 2015-08-11 14:19:55


At 8/11/15 08:13 AM, cuteboy99 wrote:
At 8/11/15 06:27 AM, RistoKy wrote: Hey!

Check it out it's my new stuff :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BWU41KD1cKA
why does it have to bee so long? I don't want to discorage your effort but it's somehow tasteless in my opinion!

tnx dude for your input

Response to Check out my stop-motion film 2015-08-11 14:25:53


I'll give my input.

Anything bad about an animation needs to be offset by something good. So in this case the animation which is pretty mediocre would need to be offset by story/humor, which it isn't so overall it is pretty boring and unappealing.

I really wish you had built a rig to keep the camera steady through the shoot as well as the constant movie is annoying and unprofessional.


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Response to Check out my stop-motion film 2015-08-11 14:34:13


At 8/11/15 02:25 PM, Blounty wrote: I'll give my input.

Anything bad about an animation needs to be offset by something good. So in this case the animation which is pretty mediocre would need to be offset by story/humor, which it isn't so overall it is pretty boring and unappealing.

well dude shit happens

Response to Check out my stop-motion film 2015-08-11 18:59:46


I loved the hell out of it. The timing and pacing seemed very appropriate. It's refreshing to see a thoughtful piece now and again, thank you.

Yeah there is a little camera bounce, crawling, and astonishingly low level (but still present) flickering, but as a viewer if that's all you noticed you missed the point ENTIRELY.

The cinematography was clear. The lighting was clear. The set, the puppet, the props were all apart of the same visual universe. Everything was done right. The film is a little bit rough around the edges, but very look-past-able.

I will be very interested in seeing what other projects you take on.

At 8/11/15 06:27 AM, RistoKy wrote: Hey!

Check it out it's my new stuff :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BWU41KD1cKA

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Response to Check out my stop-motion film 2015-08-11 19:18:10


I really enjoyed it. I love stop animation. Good job man.

Response to Check out my stop-motion film 2015-08-12 03:21:21


At 8/11/15 06:59 PM, maficmelody wrote:
I will be very interested in seeing what other projects you take on.

Thank you for the review maficmelody. I mostly focus on 2d drawn animation and this stop-motion puppet film was my first alone experience with the style so I was not surprised that it kind of a turned out little shaky.
Also if you want to see more of my stuff snoop around on my Youtube page :)

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC2RMroaFxSZ05m0XzmkV98Q