https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j5wR6-234q0
Check out my new animated short film i made with flash its really hard to sync the voice acting with the lips
comment below what do you think about the short .
At 10/2/14 12:06 PM, SpaceHamster12 wrote: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j5wR6-234q0
Check out my new animated short film i made with flash its really hard to sync the voice acting with the lips
comment below what do you think about the short .
Congratz on releasing your first cartoon! I see potential here, good sir. I liked the idea and I see what you were going for, but next time try to make the cartoon move along faster. It took too long to get to the punch line. This cartoon dragged. For example, it took 40 seconds for him to wait for the elevator, get to his room, then complain to the clerk. That should have taken 10 seconds tops. The attention span of most viewers is very short. This whole cartoon should have been less than a minute long. Just some friendly advice. But keep it up. Hope to see more from you soon. :)
