Songs youve made

[BumFodder]

Im wondering what songs people have composed before, this is one me and my friends made. I composed it and they sung it.

jack:
like a ligh n diamond stratt will glow
hes comin on down with a wkd ass flow
Bang nbang nock u down
every1 knows im from boro town
yea yea u heard me right
if you think im bad then i dont give a shite

strat1:
mc strat comin fru wif a bat
gonna giv u a wak
when he cums n atak
wif his bassline crew
so what u gona do
when mc stratney dropkicks you

strat2:
mic check 1
minaminima mic check 2
mc stratney biggin up da spenny crew
and big up the base
you're a big discrace
If u come n talk shit ill wak u in the face

strat3:
mc strat reppin up dj jack
all the other mc's are fucking wack
all it takes is a smack
or a punch to your back
and you and your crew will be put in a sack

jack2:
stratts on a fuckin mission
and he dont need your permission
to dominate the streets with his fuckin ambition

jack3:
coz im crazy, and im mental
and im not fucking gentle
if u think that your big or you think that your hard
ill piss in ya nanna's lentil

[Magical-Zorse]

I hit the studio quite often. And by studio I mean I get drunk and record myself rapping on my phone. They call me the artist formerly known as prince vince.

Yo I'm escort driving
seedy bar jiving
got some rhyming up in the sky and
my dick is so nice and super sizing
got a bag with some fries in...... it

[Malachy]

It looks to me like you want to advertise your songwriting or get some advice/critique. That's cool and your creativity is great! However, please utilize the appropriate forums:

For sharing your poetry/songs/writing you can use the Writing Forum

For stuff related to creating a song and composing the music check out the Audio Forum

If you've composed something you can upload to the Audio Portal

Keep it up!