Hello ^^
3am and i finally got this done.
I'd love some constructive feedback.
Abused the bloodstains,but i like the way it ended up.
:) Enjoy
- i come in piece,i love all cakes,i'll eat a piece and share the makes -
At 8/15/14 07:55 PM, hiserj wrote: Hello ^^
3am and i finally got this done.
I'd love some constructive feedback.
Abused the bloodstains,but i like the way it ended up.
) Enjoy
First of all: do you use graphic tablet? If yes, enable sensitivity to pressure so your lines will look more cool.
Character face look a bit boring and simple. I mean there are too simple eyebrows, eyes (even without showing eyelips), simple nose and mouse. Here you are a great video from Marc Crilley "100 Ways to Draw Manga Eyes". Usefull thing to get an image of new ways of eyes drawing.
Hole picture misses shadows and light what makes it not interesting again.
If his hand touches his face then this hand is too big. Because normal hand size is same as size of the head. Even if hand is a bit closer to us it cant be that huge.
Sleeve: you didn't show a gravity. Sleeve should be falling down on the arm.
he gave some very very good advice. Listen to all that and take it to heart.
also: super glad to see art from you, and its some decent looking stuff!! excited for more
Current Art Thread some NSFW (2022)
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. Here you are a great video from Marc Crilley "100 Ways to Draw Manga Eyes".
- i come in piece,i love all cakes,i'll eat a piece and share the makes -
At 8/16/14 04:45 AM, Archoin wrote:At 8/15/14 07:55 PM, hiserj wrote: Hello ^^First of all: do you use graphic tablet? If yes, enable sensitivity to pressure so your lines will look more cool.
3am and i finally got this done.
I'd love some constructive feedback.
Abused the bloodstains,but i like the way it ended up.
) Enjoy
yup i did enable it but i don't seem to be using a decent brush :c
- i come in piece,i love all cakes,i'll eat a piece and share the makes -
At 8/16/14 08:02 AM, hiserj wrote:At 8/16/14 04:45 AM, Archoin wrote:yup i did enable it but i don't seem to be using a decent brush :cAt 8/15/14 07:55 PM, hiserj wrote: Hello ^^First of all: do you use graphic tablet? If yes, enable sensitivity to pressure so your lines will look more cool.
3am and i finally got this done.
I'd love some constructive feedback.
Abused the bloodstains,but i like the way it ended up.
) Enjoy
If you use photoshop, to make your lines more dynamic press F5 and edit your brush like there http://glyndewis.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/06/shape_dynamics_ON.jpg (but instead of fade control i use pressure control)
