Hi there I'm just looking for some people to critique my work and get some feedback on my artwork! I feel like it would help a lot if I got some people to tell me what they think. I have only posted a few things cause I just started on newgrounds and trying to get a feel of the community here. but any sort of feedback would be awesome! my link is posted here! http://jaredgagnonart.newgrounds.com/art/ Thanks
It's best to post images into the thread so that people can get a sample of what you are capable of. It also helps pique interest in viewing your profile.
You may also continue to use this thread for personal feedback.
Anyhoo....
Details sell the grotesque.
Your linework helps this but unfortunately is lost during the coloring phase.
Try making your lines more prominent.
I suggest not to have everything as one color. It doesn't read very well, especially at a distance.
At 1/19/14 04:54 PM, JaredGagnonArt wrote: Hi there I'm just looking for some people to critique my work and get some feedback on my artwork! I feel like it would help a lot if I got some people to tell me what they think. I have only posted a few things cause I just started on newgrounds and trying to get a feel of the community here. but any sort of feedback would be awesome! my link is posted here! http://jaredgagnonart.newgrounds.com/art/ Thanks
Dude, I am newer than you.
As for critique:
I think that you could try to experiment a bit with line thickness and shading. You could maybe use more highlights and shadows.
I like this one of your works the best http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/jaredgagnonart/nameless-comic-page?context=ratings:etm.user:4805765.scouted:.offset:5
I do like the method of shading in this piece and I like that the shading effect also is in the background.
