I'm a very nice writer my ideas are nice but that's for you to judge :)
If you want to write your next scipt messge me :)
At 11/22/13 09:19 PM, ZE13 wrote: I'm a very nice writer my ideas are nice but that's for you to judge :)
If you want to write your next scipt messge me :)
Say, if I gave you character personality traits and events that are happening (a full-ready game with empty dialogues), would you write what characters are saying?
How can I know you are a good writer? Can I see your previous works?
Do you require payment? Is it OK if you work with a game, not a movie?
Well I'm a beginner I'm like a pro at tragic writing though :)
I'll send you something :)
Ok but id have to learn to connect with the characters so far I could only do that with my own but ill try.
I'm replying to the ones who asked me questions
Alright, so the patient has sent me one of his works.
He has 0 grammar, lots of typos, does not use commas or dots, does not break sentences into meaningful parts, writes all caps and !!!!!! uses lots of warning signs to depict a "drama" as he describes it. Vocabulary is OK, though, the patient even goes as far as to use common phrases such as:
"to give a devil eye to someone",
"to sit up catching one's breath",
"to break out in cold sweat",
"as time went by".
But at the same time the patient can also produce poor results such as:
"because of the long period of no beer"
"I'm gonna pop open your anus blood WILL be ever where"
"your a little B***** your worthless"
"oh so the little runt grew some balls now ay?!"
"Joe put more bullets in the gun and armed at Marvin"
"Joe: say goodbye to your pathetic life..."
"Marvin stated at joe"
"Marvin laying their in a puddle of his own blood."
These are just excerpts.
The writer is capable of doing emotional texts, although they have a lot of repetition, and he doesn't create tension. The text contains lots of unnecessary & not understandable moments. The characters have no personality, they speak as if they are the same person, bland, with no quirks, etc.
Despite all these drawbacks, implementing his dialogues in an animation could produce an effect on the viewer, so that's a large potential of his work.
So far, this writer is no better than the one I had previously, I need to make an interesting plot, not a very very long half-dramatic scene with bland characters talking all caps.
Looks like I need more practice I feel terrible :/
Btw do you know any tips of tricks to help me improve?
How are you at writing dialogue?
Smarty Art, Ninja, Action
At 11/29/13 12:07 PM, Celshaded wrote: How are you at writing dialogue?
I'm good at it! ;D
At 11/29/13 12:07 PM, Celshaded wrote: How are you at writing dialogue?
Anything for you your an amazing animator! :D
At 11/30/13 12:52 AM, ZE13 wrote:At 11/29/13 12:07 PM, Celshaded wrote: How are you at writing dialogue?I'm good at it! ;D
I already wrote a large review right in this thread where I proved that you're not a good writer.
Yet you keep saying you're a good writer, without even trying to prove that.
Where is your logic?
At 11/30/
I'm good at it! ;DI already wrote a large review right in this thread where I proved that you're not a good writer.
Yet you keep saying you're a good writer, without even trying to prove that.
Where is your logic?
Alright! Alright! I'm NOT a good writer! :(
