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Critique me

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Critique me 2013-11-19 17:03:44


Hello guys, i am from Brazil and i am totally new on newgrounds.
I am working in a new art style. Can u guys check it out ?????

My art

Thanks guys!

Response to Critique me 2013-11-20 10:53:25


i havent been scouted yet ): If someone likes it scout me please ):

Response to Critique me 2013-11-20 12:16:22


At 11/20/13 10:53 AM, andrerial wrote: i havent been scouted yet ): If someone likes it scout me please ):

scouting is not canadian health care, its not free, you post no work in this thread, so no is going to give you a critique, post work here, and if anyone gives critiques, make improvements on your work, show that you are growing as an artist and maybe someone will scout you.


Because some men aren't looking for anything logical like money. They can't be bought, bullied, reasoned or negotiated with. Some men just want to watch the world burn -Alfred

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Response to Critique me 2013-11-20 21:46:30


I put a lot of my new style in this draw. Well, im working on it!!

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Response to Critique me 2013-11-20 21:48:48



scouting is not canadian health care, its not free, you post no work in this thread, so no is going to give you a critique, post work here, and if anyone gives critiques, make improvements on your work, show that you are growing as an artist and maybe someone will scout you.

Thanks! Just posted one of them

Response to Critique me 2013-11-20 21:51:52


Another Draw. This one is an old draw, but i keep the same style!

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Response to Critique me 2013-11-21 10:21:18


Same style!!!!! I call this "Willy, o ganso executivo" hahaha

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Response to Critique me 2013-11-21 10:23:26


Batman :) i THINK this was my first draw using the simmetry tool on sketchup!!

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Response to Critique me 2013-11-21 11:11:24


At 11/21/13 10:23 AM, andrerial wrote: Batman :) i THINK this was my first draw using the simmetry tool on sketchup!!

it's good

Response to Critique me 2013-11-21 15:55:12


Thaaaaanks!!!! ^-^

Response to Critique me 2013-11-21 19:27:09


At 11/21/13 11:11 AM, antuel wrote:
At 11/21/13 10:23 AM, andrerial wrote: Batman :) i THINK this was my first draw using the simmetry tool on sketchup!!
it's good

much paint, such wow.


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Response to Critique me 2013-11-21 20:07:44


Its an Ace Ventura caracture!!!

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Response to Critique me 2013-11-27 14:31:56


Another old draw

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Response to Critique me 2013-11-28 07:56:27


Alot of your pieces seems to be just straight on view which aren't that interesting to look at, need to add more unique poses to give the characters more of a personality.


I feel slightly hollow inside.

Response to Critique me 2013-11-28 10:20:26


At 11/28/13 07:56 AM, VacantVirtuoso wrote: Alot of your pieces seems to be just straight on view which aren't that interesting to look at, need to add more unique poses to give the characters more of a personality.

OOOOH, thanks! I need to improve that! I have a lot of trouble on that! Thanks!!!!

Response to Critique me 2013-11-28 16:03:23


Andre hey,

I've been a critic for a while now, and I'm happy to give you some pointers.
The work you've shown you've an understanding and depth in your work; that time and process is in each, but for my advice, you need to decide which style of art you're going for here. To explain, it seems you go from harsh edging work (hard outlines) to a more realistic flow.
It's fine to do both independently but definitely work on finding one YOU are happiest with.
Lastly, research and begin adding a light source (google it if you're not aware), it'll make your shading work much more impressive.

That said, good start, very good. I look forward to seeing more of it in time to come.

Response to Critique me 2013-12-02 21:45:09


i've been working on poses and im finishing this draw! What i can do to make an awesome art on that ?

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Response to Critique me 2013-12-03 21:13:00


At 12/2/13 09:45 PM, andrerial wrote: i've been working on poses and im finishing this draw! What i can do to make an awesome art on that ?

work on anatomy... it seems to be your weakest component in all the pictures i have seen from you even for cartoon its important to know proportions.

Response to Critique me 2013-12-04 17:12:23


At 12/3/13 09:13 PM, Tapersteve wrote:
At 12/2/13 09:45 PM, andrerial wrote: i've been working on poses and im finishing this draw! What i can do to make an awesome art on that ?
work on anatomy... it seems to be your weakest component in all the pictures i have seen from you even for cartoon its important to know proportions.

Basically that
Even if you are stylizing, you need to have a decent understanding of human anatomy or your works will suffer for it. Try taking figure drawing classes somewhere or pick up a photo book and make some reference studies. It will definetly help you developing a feel for the human body.


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Response to Critique me 2013-12-04 18:49:09



Basically that
Even if you are stylizing, you need to have a decent understanding of human anatomy or your works will suffer for it. Try taking figure drawing classes somewhere or pick up a photo book and make some reference studies. It will definetly help you developing a feel for the human body.

Ok! I will work on that! Thanks a lot! I will post my anatomy studies!!

Response to Critique me 2013-12-05 06:25:21


try blending your colours with a brush, and work on anatomy alot. Draw realism, it will help with stylized work.