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Head in the Clouds 2012-02-10 15:59:44 Reply

What do you guys think about my current illustration?

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Response to Head in the Clouds 2012-02-10 17:55:47 Reply

At 1 hour ago, kiareri wrote: What do you guys think about my current illustration?

All I can think of is a small white dot of reflection in the rosy cheeks to finish it off, to be fair. It really seems very nice. Got some more stuff?


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Response to Head in the Clouds 2012-02-10 18:22:01 Reply

At 2 hours ago, kiareri wrote: What do you guys think about my current illustration?

It seems really small. I like the colouring though. It's got some nice warm/cool contrast.

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Response to Head in the Clouds 2012-02-10 18:26:56 Reply

At 2 minutes ago, Spaghetti14 wrote: It seems really small.

It's not the size, it's where you stick it.

In this case, the art portal.

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Response to Head in the Clouds 2012-02-10 18:28:32 Reply

Not broken link.


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Response to Head in the Clouds 2012-03-15 04:02:40 Reply

At 1 month ago, test-object wrote:
At 1 hour ago, kiareri wrote: What do you guys think about my current illustration?
All I can think of is a small white dot of reflection in the rosy cheeks to finish it off, to be fair. It really seems very nice. Got some more stuff?

This I do. You can check out more of my art at www.kiareri.com
Thanks for the awesome comment!

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Response to Head in the Clouds 2012-03-15 04:08:23 Reply

The right iris is shaped differently from the left, and the angular lock of hair on the forehead above the right eyebrow is confusing- seems more like an errant brush stroke that wandered in from somewhere else. Lovely illustration otherwise though.


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Response to Head in the Clouds 2012-03-15 05:39:21 Reply

At 1 hour ago, kiareri wrote:
At 1 month ago, test-object wrote:
At 1 hour ago, kiareri wrote: What do you guys think about my current illustration?
All I can think of is a small white dot of reflection in the rosy cheeks to finish it off, to be fair. It really seems very nice. Got some more stuff?
This I do. You can check out more of my art at www.kiareri.com
Thanks for the awesome comment!

it is a really nice illustration, but don't use this site just to plug your website and add your art here not just previews. If someone likes your work enough they'll go to your profile and check your site link.

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Response to Head in the Clouds 2012-03-15 10:46:42 Reply

I think you should remove the text "head in the clouds" from the piece, it distracts from the piece and doesn't add anything. I agree with the person who said one eye is a bit off.

The hair looks great though, and the technique is really well done.

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Response to Head in the Clouds 2012-03-15 13:07:15 Reply

I like it, very painterly. I would suggest adding more highlights to hit the contrast home. Since you have a very painterly style and use purple for shadows instead of a much darker shade, you need to really stretch the value scale in the other direction to have a full set of values. It will also make her look more...juicy, I guess?