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I need some criticism

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Response to I need some criticism 2011-07-14 10:42:51


This guy is supposed to be morpheus, but his head didn't really come out like it was supposed to. You guys probably wouldn't guess it if I didn't say who he was.
I didn't want to submit this one because it looks very unfinished, as it was a sketch for training, but I don't think it's that unfinished.

I need some criticism


Intro of darkness then redness then whiteness.

My "art" :D

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Response to I need some criticism 2011-07-14 10:45:52


And here's something i'm working on. It's supposed to be Bob Marley chillin', I'm probably going to give this to a friend of mine who loves him, but I can't get his eyes right. I'm not sure if i'll go with a somewhat realistic look for the eyes, or something more cartoony.
In other news, I've downloaded Photoshop CS Whatever Trial, so i'll look up some tutorials to see if I can get something colored in here, this thread looks dull!

I need some criticism


Intro of darkness then redness then whiteness.

My "art" :D

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Response to I need some criticism 2011-08-21 16:55:00


So here's one of my first attempts at digital coloring.

Can't say I'm happy with it, I couldn't quite capture the style when I digitalized it.

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Intro of darkness then redness then whiteness.

My "art" :D

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Response to I need some criticism 2011-08-21 19:43:59


And here's captain MeatBall, who is my deviantID.

I need some criticism


Intro of darkness then redness then whiteness.

My "art" :D

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Response to I need some criticism 2011-08-25 14:51:45


Here's the colored version of "epic solo". Not that epic, but I like it.

I may have overdone it on the lights, though.

I need some criticism


Intro of darkness then redness then whiteness.

My "art" :D

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Response to I need some criticism 2011-08-26 10:37:02


Fun.
Keep it up.


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Response to I need some criticism 2011-08-26 15:16:50


At 8/26/11 10:37 AM, google521 wrote: Fun.
Keep it up.

Short and sweet, thanks man!


Intro of darkness then redness then whiteness.

My "art" :D

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Response to I need some criticism 2011-08-28 11:41:47


NOt bad i think you have a nice start, keep practicing =)


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Response to I need some criticism 2011-09-09 15:05:31


At 8/28/11 11:41 AM, dude196 wrote: NOt bad i think you have a nice start, keep practicing =)

Will do man!
Here's something I made using one of the poses I posted, it's still pretty basic.

I need some criticism


Intro of darkness then redness then whiteness.

My "art" :D

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Response to I need some criticism 2011-09-10 11:09:25


A little more...
Feet are hell to draw.

I need some criticism


Intro of darkness then redness then whiteness.

My "art" :D

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Response to I need some criticism 2011-12-18 12:22:01


Random doodle time?

I need some criticism


Intro of darkness then redness then whiteness.

My "art" :D

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Response to I need some criticism 2011-12-19 14:21:11


Now unlike those old timey movies it has colour.

I need some criticism


Intro of darkness then redness then whiteness.

My "art" :D

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Response to I need some criticism 2011-12-19 14:25:48


At 12/19/11 02:21 PM, 56325 wrote: Now unlike those old timey movies it has colour.

There is something really wrong with his right hand.It looks like it's out of place.Also the perspective on the gun is wrong.And you could really add some shading.And it would have been more interesting if you drew the whole character,not cut off.

All I can say for you is too keep practicing :)

Response to I need some criticism 2011-12-19 14:30:33


At 12/19/11 02:21 PM, 56325 wrote: Now unlike those old timey movies it has colour.

not bad.

Response to I need some criticism 2011-12-19 14:35:34


At 12/19/11 02:21 PM, 56325 wrote: Now unlike those old timey movies it has colour.

Yeah, like Psychosheep said, his 'right' hand is actually a left hand. Try to pay attention as to what hands look like in certain positions, I usually look at my own and when I'm not sure how it should look.


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