At 2/6/14 05:40 PM, Sockembop wrote:
I agree. This is really good though. your characters are always convincing.
This might be my favourite comment I've ever gotten on my art.
The facial expression and the pose and clothing and hair... Her left hand seems a little awkward though. I think the palm should be turned in towards her body rather than away. And the plume of smoke coming from her mouth looks a little bushy and thick like cauliflower or something.
I think the issue is more that I didn't curve the back of the hand enough, rather than whether the palm is angled towards the viewer or not. But thanks for the critique.
Trying some different things.